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| What is Crooked Cannot Be Made Straight by Nina the powerwriter | 1 Review(s) |
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| Kitt of Lindon | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/8/2004 |
| You wrote in first person very skillfully. (I am very sure is called 'first person'.) And you did great at capturing the essence of the moment. I caught one little misspelling in the summary. It should be 'bears' instead of 'bares'. (I simply couldn't wonder off without telling you.) Cheers! | |