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| Trumpet of the Swan by Jocelyn | 1 Review(s) |
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| Ladybird | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 3/23/2004 |
| What a Chapter, well worth the wait. You don't make it easy on them do you. Congratulations on the "love Scene" very well done, I must confess I was hoping that she would agree with him, but on reflection I agree with you that it wouldn't be that easy for her to fall in love. I find your characters very well written, you have made their conflicts believeable and I especially like Finarfin and Earwen, they have actual personalities and don't seem cowards, which is how many people portray them. I can't wait to see what they find out about C and G. You have talked nicely about Galadriel's desire to go to middle-earth, it seems perfectly reasonable that whe would wish to explore new places given how restless and eagar she is, yet she wants permission and definatly doesn't equate her desire with Feanor's- very interesting. It will be interesting as well to find out what her reactions are to the incident on the beach, I would imagine that she has some soul searching to do. Keep up the great work and update as soon as possible, though i know how it is with work. the chapter was well written with out the beta. Looking forward to the next. | |