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| Flames by Lindelea | 2 Review(s) |
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| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: Prologue on 3/8/2005 |
| Ah, am just getting started with this one. Hope you don't mind some late feedback. Excellent beginning. Probably won't review every chapter, but am certain you understand. Author Reply: Me? Mind feedback, late or any other kind? Never! And I understand. The feedback you leave certainly is heartening. But you probably know that, from getting reviews on your own story. (Which is still at the top of my list to read when I get some "uninterrupted time". Right now all I seem to be able to manage is short things like drabbles...) | |
| Grey Wonderer | Reviewed Chapter: Prologue on 4/28/2004 |
| This was very interesting. It will, I'm sure, help me a great deal with the current one. (Thank you for the emails btw) In my mind, I kept seeing the story as you wrote it from the other side in the one of FF.net and they fit together quite nicely. I was relieved that Pippin hadn't known about the ban because I didn't like to think that even in his own troubles he would have allowed anyone to go through that sort of trouble for his actions. Your Paladin is every bit as nice as the one I have written in the past! LOL All of the stories about Pippin as Thain always make me a bit sad because he never seems to be happy in any of it, even the one time I tried to write him as Thain, I didn't have him enjoy it either. LOL You have invested quite a bit in your history and it is very detailed. I may need to back up and read some of the others. Oh, I read the entire story, I just decided to put the reiview here as prologues seldom get reviews. Author Reply: You're right, prologues almost never get reviews, it seems! Glad it helped, and yes, this story was carefully written so that it would fit nicely with the one on ff.net. I'm with you. I think that if Pippin had learned of the Ban on Ferdi he would have returned to Tookland, no matter the cost to himself. A happy Thain? Now that would be a story challenge! I wonder why we think hobbits aren't happy to be Thain? I'd love to hear your comments on the other stories, especially if you notice any inconsistencies that need tweaking, or if there's a part you find rings particularly true (for the sake of consistency). Wonder when I'll run out of stories to tell? | |