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| Flames by Lindelea | 1 Review(s) |
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| Beruthiel | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/13/2004 |
| Off to an interesting start. I'd have liked to see Ferdi's reaction when he first heard that Pippin was missing and presumed dead. What was Ferdi doing out in the woods, anyway? Author Reply: Y'know, I've been thinking on Ferdi's reaction to the news of Pippin for quite awhile now, and am pondering how I might incorporate it into the "Paladin becomes Thain" story. If I can get it to come out right, that story would end just as "Flames" is beginning. That would be a neat trick. Why is Ferdi in the woods? Could be he's following Pippin, though he won't admit it, having been laughed to scorn for suggesting that Pippin's not dead... Don't know yet, as the Thain story is not outlined to the end. I had a "final" chapter written, but it is no longer the final chapter if I extend it to meet up with "Flames". Originally as written, Ferdi was in the woods because he was running away from his troubles. You can see hints of that in this chapter (his thoughts on everyone telling him he's useless) Thanks for reviewing! | |