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| The Prince and The Shipwright by Dragon | 2 Review(s) |
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| Kitt of Lindon | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 3/25/2004 |
| I like the picture you are creating of Beardo...er, I mean, Cirdan. I wish I had found this story sooner and I hope to find the time to read the rest today. | |
| Miss Aranel | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 8/20/2003 |
| Poor family...it's sad, but I like it that you've included the times between Ereinion and his parents before he leaves. And they're such a loving family too...that makes it harder, in a way, to send a little one away. Ereinion's packing reminded me very much kid-rational in packing: why take things you'd really rather not even use? Several times on family trips we had to stop at a department store to pick up something that got overlooked amid the piles of bathing suits and card games that we always brought along--like sneakers! The musing that anything that will do you good can't be any good at all was cute too--even poor Ereinion was worried at the time. Reminds me of vegetables. Still a good mix of sadness and fun...though there isn't much fun when things go crumbly, is there? --Aranel | |