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| The Prince and The Shipwright by Dragon | 3 Review(s) |
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| Kitt of Lindon | Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 3/25/2004 |
| Now Beardo has me scared. I was trembling a bit there for Erienion. Then again, Beardo always scares me. He really hasn't had much experience with children, has he? This is written really well, for I can simply feel all of Erienion's emotions. | |
| Antigone_Q | Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 10/19/2003 |
| I hope you go back to this one. I liked it very much. | |
| Miss Aranel | Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 8/21/2003 |
| Oh! I think I like this Cirdan! I haven't read many stories with him, and the personality that you've given him is excellent! I love the way you showed both Ereinion and Cirdan's thoughts through their little exchange so that the readers could understand their rationale. I also liked the contrasts of manners between the two---Ereinion trying awfully hard to do the right and proper things, while Cirdan walks around in damp socks and speaks with his mouth full. Splendid! And the bit about him prefering to use the back door...definitely someone who likes to choose whether he'll be around people or not. Loved it. Thatharien seems to be a real sweetie---hope to see a little of her every now and then. Wonderful, wonderful chapter---I liked the previous ones as well, but this one stood out to me for some reason---maybe I just liked meeting Cirdan! --Aranel | |