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| From Princeling to Warrior by Manderly | 2 Review(s) |
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| hisielome | Reviewed Chapter: 10 on 4/24/2004 |
| You are plainly evil. Have you no pity for an elfling and his keeper? Evil....Evil....Evil! I guess that Aldeon should be glad that his brother passed out, no more pain or grief; yet, this is so sad. Mina Sedth, Hisie Lome Author Reply: All right, I must admit that I was pretty hard on the elfling. Bad enough that he's near death, and now his protector is killed. Pain and guilt, what a deadly combination. At least Aldeon is now here to take care of him. Maybe there is light at the end of the tunnel. | |
| Firnsarnien | Reviewed Chapter: 10 on 4/24/2004 |
| *sob* That...that...*sob*...that was t...tt...*sniff*...too short! *hiccup* Why'd he have to die? *sob* Why? *sniff* No fair! You didn't even warn us or anything! *sniffle* And what's happened to Hesin? Is he all right? Did someone pull him out from under the horse? Aaaaah! This is another horrible cliffy! I think Legolas has some serious grieving to do doesn't he? Not to mention the trauma of what he's seen and the fact that he killed another living creature, even if it was orcs. Yes, I think he's gonna take some time to recover physically AND emotionally. He's been through a lot! I can't wait for the next chappy! Woo hoo! Tomorrow? You gonna post it tomorrow? Author Reply: Sorry, didn't mean to make you cry, but the evil part of me is happy that my story can make a reader cry - I must be doing something right. Yes, Legolas is going to have to get over some major issues, but first he has get himself away from the brink of death before he can deal with anything else. I know this chapter was very short, so I will be posting the next one very soon to make up for it. Again, thanks for reviewing. | |