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| An Act of Betrayal by Manderly | 1 Review(s) |
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| Firnsarnien | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 5/6/2004 |
| Ah, angst in all it's glory! And you write it so lovely! :) It's just the right touch, although personally, I could go for a ton more...heh, heh! ;) But, it's just great. Gives me such wonderful heart pangs. I kinda feel sorry for Meldon. He loves his brother and wants him back, he just doesn't see that what he is doing is wrong. It's his Adar that's twisted. I hope he realizes that before it's too late. I like the way you make him gentle when he tends to Leggy. It really shows his reluctance to hurt another Elf and makes him more human...er...more Elvish. ;) Wow, and he didn't even lose his temper at Leggy's outburst as his father would have. Ah, poor Aldeon and Hesin. Finding that blood certainly didn't help their state of mind any, nor their heart. I hope they rescue Leggy soon before Meldon's father hurts him worse, or, before he Easterlings get their hands on him! :O *shudder* Hurry with the next chappy! How 'bout you post again today? Like, when I get home from work? Heh, heh! Author Reply: So you are reading this at work? I really admire people who do that. I am prsonally too much of a coward to do it myself, always thinking the whole world would know that I am goofing off. I feel sorry for Meldon too. The poor elf is really stuck between his conscience and his love for his brother. I am afraid that Aldeon and Hesin have a bit more worrying to do yet. | |