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| StarFire by Lindelea | 4 Review(s) |
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| Dreamflower | Reviewed Chapter: 14 on 9/1/2004 |
| HUH!?!?!?!??! | |
| Lyta Padfoot | Reviewed Chapter: 14 on 5/7/2004 |
| I hope the reprieve won't come too late, StarFire doesn't appear in your later works. | |
| Sulriel | Reviewed Chapter: 14 on 5/5/2004 |
| I just love Eglantine, she has that solid hobbit sense. -but what a cliffhange for the end. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter! Author Reply: Here's the next chapter! | |
| FantasyFan | Reviewed Chapter: 14 on 5/5/2004 |
| There's so much I love Pippin's interactions with his mother. ‘Peregrin Took,’ she said softly. Pippin jumped. ‘What did I do now?’ he asked, immediately reduced to a lad caught in the midst of mischief. He He! Moms are the same no matter who you are, eh? Don't think she isn't going to bring up slipping the escort, too. It doesn't matter if he's the Thain, his mom is going to call him on his actions. But done with love, and in confidence that he is a good Thain, and will be a great one. I love the part where she makes him think about his actions, and I especially love how whe thinks his father would be proud of him. Paladin did love his son, for all he couldn't understand him sometimes. Regi doesn't say he's heard the pony has been killed, only that the pen is empty. I'm holding out some hope that Tom's long ride is just to buy time, but it's a small hope. Has Ferdi gone too? Have they taken Starfire somewhere until the morning? Poor Tom. Poor Ferdi. Author Reply: The next chapter is up, and has been shaped somewhat by one of your reviews. I was originally going to have Ferdi... but wait. If you haven't read the chapter yet, I don't want to spoil it for you. I'll continue this comment after you've read the next chapter. Your comments about Eglantine and Paladin are spot on. Thanks for reviewing! | |