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| Interlude In Imladris by Jay of Lasgalen | 6 Review(s) |
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| Vi | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/10/2004 |
| Very resourceful is our Legolas And Elladan and Elrohir never miss a beat when it comes to teasing. So all is well at the moment? Loved Arewn's teasing, too Vi Author Reply: Enjoy the teasing while you can. All is well - for now. ;) | |
| Nilmandra | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/7/2004 |
| Poor Legolas - trouble does seem to follow him! I hadn't realized you had a new story going - do not forget that poor Legolas is actually still senseless in his earlier life, poor elfling. I am looking forward to seeing them do a little troll hunting, and I would bet Legolas's and Elrohir's little adventure will be made known. I would not be surprised if somehow, Arwen and Aragorn reataliate too! Author Reply: I haven't forgotten about the younger Legolas - but at least we know he will recover eventually. The troll hunting will be full of action, and a few people will find out who didn't know about the earlier adventure. | |
| daw the minstrel | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/7/2004 |
| I'm relieved that the horse is OK. Elladan and Elrohir are wicked to tease Legolas about Arwen, and so is she! These friends are a lot of fun when you see them together. So is the lost pack going to come back to haunt him somehow? Author Reply: I think it would be logical for everyone to expect Legolas and Arwen to marry eventually - apart from them. So the twins have fun reminding them both about it. Hmm, the lost pack - it does not reappear in the original story, but as I'm making several changes as I repost, it may! It would add to the angst level in Lasgalen, after all. | |
| LOTRFaith | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/7/2004 |
| Am assuming that you are going to be changing this story slightly to the changes in the previous story? Shadows over Lasgalen? I remember that you changed the ending it that..... so am rather curious as to how you will change this one:-) Looking forward to it most eagerly! Namaarie~ Author Reply: The main changes are in the way the characters speak - I got rid of contractions like "I'm" - and several scenes have been developed and expanded where they were too rushed before. The ending will be slightly different too. I'm glad you're reading and reviewing here! | |
| Rose Sared | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/7/2004 |
| And I suppose Aragorn will see them together and confusion will reign for even longer. He he, you are evil woman, evil. Nice Ch, moves the story right along. Rose Author Reply: Poor Aragorn! Legolas had better be careful, though, he doesn't want to get Arwen really mad at him. More fun next chapter, and maybe just a tiny cliffhanger too. | |
| lwarren | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/7/2004 |
| Havens, you scared me! (I love it, Havens instead of Heavens, I guess). I figured Legolas was going to get banged and pummeled by floating logs and rocks and whatever, and just about die. But...NOT! Thankfully, the elf and the horse were none the worse for wear. :-) Good chapter, I love the idea of a troll hunt....just think of all the trouble those 4 can get into on a hunt like that! It boggles the mind! And Arwen...it would serve Legolas right if she planted her fist on his pretty nose! What was he thinking...or rather was this at Aragorn's expense, just to see his reaction? Great chapter - I was just getting ready to leave when I saw it flagged on my email. Terrific way to start the weekend! BTW, have a good one, Jay! linda Author Reply: I could have had Legolas seriously injured by the flood, but this story is about the troll hunt. Besides, Nilmandra has aleady done it wonderfully to poor Elrohir in History Lessons. There will be plenty of action and angst, don't worry! Legolas was teasing Aragorn, he'd noticed how smitten he was with Arwen. Legolas was just 'remembering' an idea that Thranduil, Elrond and Celebrian had once had - 'hey, wouldn't it be great if the kids got married when they're grown up?' ;) | |