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Grey Shores and Other Poems  by Meldewen Ilce 1 Review(s)
shireboundReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/13/2004
These are lovely. (They don't all conform to the strict 5-7-5 rule of haiku, but that doesn't take away from their beauty.) I especially like the first one.

Author Reply: Thank you, shirebound, I tried to stay within the 5-7-5 rule but obviously I was a bit tired when I wrote "Grey Shores". Anyway, I hope to improve myself, and perhaps be able to stay within the 5-7-5 rule but if not I hope to convey some of the ideas I have with the words I choose.

Thanks again and I look forward to more of "Mind To Mind"!

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