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| What Lies Within by Lily Frost | 3 Review(s) |
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| diva | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/24/2004 |
| Hey! I like it so far! I'm a pretty big elf and vampire fan put both of them together and you'll come up with one awesome story! Like i said before I like it, and please update soon! ~Diva~ | |
| ColonwenOfGreenWood | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/23/2004 |
| I`m Writing regaurding my last not to you.I am not sure weather you intended your note back unpeacfully or some other mean, but yes i do contact with Tolkien and not by internet, he is a very very old family friend. Im sorry for the substitution of numbers for words but my finger happens to be broken and typing is not an easy thing nor is having the time to correctly spell my words, i was in a bit of a rush last time i was writting to you so if you took my mis-spelling as an affending gesture i am sorry. Anyway, i do not have a site for i happen to be out of loop when it comes to knowing how to make one, or find one for that matter and my elvish saying.. Im daring you to do a little work / research to try and find out what it means. | |
| Lyn | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/14/2004 |
| Really Scary! Just two suggestions: reign - the length of time a king or queen is in power rein - strips of leather attached to a bridle, used to control a horse's head (and thus his body). lose - to be bereft of, to no longer have. (sounds like LUUZ) loose - to release, as in loose the fetters on a horse or loose the hounds of wear. Also, it can mean to be baggy or saggy, as in loose trousers (sounds like LOOS) Keep a pocket dictionary by your keyboard for quick reference. ^_^ | |