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Castle Part 1 and 2  by Timmy2222 3 Review(s)
strider's girlReviewed Chapter: 7 on 5/19/2004
I decided to answer your questions you put forward in your author reply.

I've told my best friend about this story and she says she has been reading it and says its really good. She doesn't really like reviewing so she hasn't left a review. She says its a really descripitive plot and full of excitement and wonderful characters.

I do read a lot of LOTR fiction. Mostly based on after the War of the Ring. I like to read people's interprentation of what could befall the characters after the War, and you've done a good job on that!

I suppose one of my favourite bits are interaction between Aragorn and Vlohiri. A very interesting friendship has been created. Vlohiri's insistance that Aragorn is a poacher has been quite amusing. I hope to see more in their friendly relationship blossom in the coming chapters!

Hope to see more soon from you.


TieAillin AlcarionReviewed Chapter: 7 on 5/16/2004
GREAT story! I can really see Aragorn and the other characters. Fully in character for him. I can't wait for the next chapter! I hope the website starts functioning fully soon.


I only see a few spots where I can see a bit of difference in your use of language. There are a few times where I know German uses the present tense of the verb, but English uses a different tense, but it doesn't obscure the meaning.

Waiting for more,
TieAillin

striders girlReviewed Chapter: 7 on 5/16/2004
I love this story! This is one of the best pieces of LOTR fiction I've ever read! THe characters and plot are unique and different. Everything surprises me at every turn! I hope to read more soon! A thrilling epic is in the works!

Author Reply: Hi Striders Girl,
thanks for the review! There truly is more to come since three chapters are already stored... I hoped that an approach like this would be another path to walk. If you like it, please, tell others about it. Do you read much of LOTR fiction?

Have you got a favorite scene yet - or would you like to wait and tell me when you will have read the end?

Take care,
Timmy

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