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| The Early Adventures of Fwo and Unga Bee by cpsings4him | 4 Review(s) |
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| Hobbit Lass21 | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 12/28/2004 |
| ^_^ This is so cute!! I need to save this, to read on a sad day. 'Dab-dalp da gwey!!" I can't stop smiling. I simply can't, nor do I want to!! Thank you SO much! | |
| Lindelea | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/18/2004 |
| TBC? Hoorah! Very nice descriptions, made me long for "baby days" to return again. Your baby talk rings true and yet is not difficult to read (which takes skill in writing, let me tell you! So many times I'm annoyed rather than charmed by written baby talk!). “Well then, it’s a good thing I’ve got two hands, isn’t it?” Somehow this witticism on Bilbo's part sounds very much in character. Thanks for a pleasant read, just perfect for an insomnia-plagued night. Think I'll go back and give the pillow another chance with this bit of sweetness to chew on. Author Reply: Oh! Thank you so much for your thoughtful review! I really appreciate your comments. I'm so glad you found Fwo's 'baby talk' to have a ring of truth to it. I really struggled over it because I know just what you mean about being annoyed by some attempts at 'baby talk' that I have read. Sometimes you wonder if these folks have ever met a toddler. Also, I'm glad that Bilbo came across sounding in his own witty character. Hope it gave you some pleasant WEE!Fwo! dreams! More to come soon! Blessings! cp | |
| Breon Briarwood | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/17/2004 |
| Oh, *gush!* He's soo sweet! I really love young Frodo stories, but I don't think I've seen any this young. I can just picture him - so adorable. But, you know, it's always the innocent looking ones that get in the most trouble. Can't wait to read more. :-D Author Reply: Wow! Thank you for that sweet review! I too am a lover of very young Frodo stories but found that there were just too few of them out there - and even fewer where, as you said, he's truely just a baby. You are dead on right about the innocent ones finding the most trouble to get into. Hehe - I was proof enough of THAT theory! More coming soon! Stay tuned! Blessings! cp | |
| shirebound | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/17/2004 |
| I'm so glad you posted this here! I'm still melted into a happy puddle over this incredibly sweet story. “Wub ‘ou.” The toddler said simply never lifting his head from his uncle‘s shoulder. Bilbo hugged the little lad in his arms even closer and pressed another kiss, this time landing it on the sweet softness of Frodo’s little neck, which made him squirm from the tickle just a little bit. “Oh, my sweet lad. Your Uncle Bee loves you, too.” *sigh* Author Reply: Awww! Thank you!! I really apprecite you rec'ing it on LJ...all the reviews I got on it there just made my day! Glad you liked it so much! You have written so many stories that are on my favorites list, it's nice to return the favor a bit! Blessings! cp | |