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| The Sound of Silence by Deana | 1 Review(s) |
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| Eruanna | Reviewed Chapter: 13 on 5/20/2004 |
| Well, if you *insist* on having a review......... ;-) This is great! I *love* Legolas angst...one of my favorites! This story has good development, and *lots* of lovely angst! *is happy* On the other hand, I'm getting kind of tired of hearing about them "kicking their horses into a run". ;-) ;-) Try a shift of vocabulary. ;-) I like the conversation with the trees! There just seems to be something special about the trees reacting to Legolas...I've never thought of the Elves being able to carry on an actual conversation with trees, but who knows? ;-) It's cooler that way. ;-) The internal bleeding gave me a fright. ;-) On to the next chapters! ~*~Eruanna~*~ | |