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Long Home of Mortals  by jodancingtree 2 Review(s)
CalimeReviewed Chapter: 2 on 8/23/2004
I think my eyes are sparkling a bit more than usual! Water has always had a special place in my imagination of heaven; your picture is delightful.

Having Frodo's wake up naked since he was so filled with shame was an inspired idea. I like how Sam and Frodo each had a different encounter: how the Lord met them where they were. Beautiful!



Author Reply: I'm so glad you're enjoying this, Calime. I have to admit, I had a wonderful time writing this - it was such fun trying to imagine a heavenly country! And I have a feeling the Lord really does meet each of us individually, where we are and "who" we are... unlike the way we sometimes try to make everyone fit the same mold...

jo

PIppinfan1988Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 7/11/2004
I like your "heaven"! So vivid and so colorful. Blue crabs, green fish, amethyst stones at the bottom of a clear, effervescent riverbed...mother-of-pearl crayfish! I was like Frodo; I didn't want to come out! Beautiful--and from what I've read...quite scriptural. :-)

Pippinfan

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