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| Blood of the Bullroarer by Pervinca | 3 Review(s) |
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| powerwriter | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 6/3/2004 |
| This story is coming along very well! You captured Lotho's sick little schemings, and set up Diamond's character as strong but delicate at the same time. Good job :) Author Reply: I forgot you reviewed this chapter :P Thanks so much - I'm glad Diamond's character is likable. I've tried to make her fairly unique from how other authors have portrayed her. The next chapter is in its planning stage, so look out for it soon in your inbox :P | |
| Lyta Padfoot | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/21/2004 |
| I shudder to think of what will befall Diamond's father, poor hobbit. Father and daughter seem very close, the line about diamonds being more precious than emeralds said it all. The situation in the North sounds pretty bad - they probably found a balance that worked for them, but Lotho actions are making them dance with one leg. I hope the next chapter arrives soon. Author Reply: Being a bit of a daddy's girl myself, I enjoy writing about close father-daughter relationships. I also feel that when a father has only one daughter, and many sons, he's bound to dote on her at least a little. Next chapter should hopefully be posted soon. - Pervinca | |
| SilverMoonLady | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/21/2004 |
| Nifty! I'm totally intrigued by this story, and I can't wait to see where you are going to take it. Your style is very readable and evocative, and you are setting up some lovely tensions that I'm eager to see played out. Wow, putting our dear Peregrin's own bride in marital jeopardy! *grin* Waiting for more! Author Reply: Intrigued is good :) I was worried when I first started writing this story that some people would find it a little...well, sick, I suppose. But the events of this one are becoming somewhat important in another story, so I thought the tale needed to be told :P Plus, I'm a sucker for alternate couples. Will try and get the next chapter out soon (even though the last time I said that it took me longer than I hoped, lol). - Pervinca | |