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| Castle Part 1 and 2 by Timmy2222 | 7 Review(s) |
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| Szepilona10 | Reviewed Chapter: 10 on 4/7/2008 |
| I really loved this story! ~Szepilona10~ Author Reply: Hi Szepilona, I'm glad you told me your opinion. It's always nice to know that this story is still read. - T. | |
| Tari | Reviewed Chapter: 10 on 11/14/2007 |
| I just finished this marvelous story. I just knew Aragorn would take Vlohir with him. Now I'll have to read "Twilight of the Gods". You are an extremely talented writer. I could hardly stop reading and was glad I had the time to finish today. I found your story listed in the 2006 MEFAwards. (I'm a little behind in my reading.) Tari Author Reply: Thank you for your review. It's always a pleasure to know that so many people like the story. Hope you will enjoy Twilight of the Gods as well. - T. | |
| Michelle | Reviewed Chapter: 10 on 7/18/2005 |
| This story is advancing quickly from a simple bookmark to one of my favourite stories. It just works well on so many levels. The storytelling just "flows" and the character development is pure genius. I especially like the OCs. They are all fleshed out as complete characters, but I found that I adore Vlohiri and Lomac the most. And Lady Saborian makes for an impressive villain! I'd love to read more about Vlohiri and Lomac and I'm sure they could carry their own stories! And lastly: Great idea to tell the story from (mostly) Vlohiri's POV and never venturing into Aragorn's mind. He stays a black spot for the most part of the story and for me this added to the tension. | |
| Elvenstar | Reviewed Chapter: 10 on 6/8/2004 |
| i just wanted to say....i could not leave my seat untill this story had been read. you write very well,and,kept me on the edge of my chair through the whole story. i read alot,but, i dont leave a review very often. not because i dont want to,but,because i read soooooo much....i would spend most of my time reviewing.but now with this story i could not go on to another untill i told you just how good of a story this is. only one regret....i would have wished to read on at least untill the little boy "hero" at last met Lady Arwen. Maybe you will continue a part three for that? i hope so. keep up your writing in any case. you ARE very good at it in my opinion anyway. have a very pleasent day.... and,thanks for the entertainment. Elvenstar :-) Author Reply: Thank you very much for your review! Vlohiri's journey to Minas Tirith, his meeting with Queen Arwen, and his further life at the White City will be a part of the (kind of) sequel "Twilight of the Gods". Take care, Timmy :) | |
| striders girl | Reviewed Chapter: 10 on 5/21/2004 |
| Wow! I loved the ending! You have done a wonderful job with this story. The characterisation of every character is amazing. You have reconstructed the personality's of the characters truly and kept them expanding throughout the story. My favourite character out of the OCs would have to be Vlohiri! I'm glad he decided to help Aragorn and his determination to bring help made him a pleasurable character to not forget. I'm glad that he is going with Aragorn. A nice way to end the story to. You got right to the point and kept everything interesting and forthcoming. Not once did I get bored with this! The story is a fantastic piece of talent, and I hope you continue writing more stories, as you have such an amzing talent in this area! The fact that English is not your native tongue makes you even better! You are able to write in 2 languages (I can't even do that!). The whole story was amazing and something different from what I usually read. I chose to read this because I thought it had potential and the summary caught my eye. Everything about this story is a pleasure to read. I wish you good luck on the possible sequel, and when (or if) you write and post the sequel anytime in the future then I'll be there to read it! Thank you for such a great story and making my dull afternoon's exciting with this story! 10/10 writer. 10/10 for the story. Brillient, I do not know what to say, the ending was brilliently constructed. WELL DONE TIMMY2222! | |
| Dreamflower | Reviewed Chapter: 10 on 5/21/2004 |
| This is a wonderful story. I love your characterization of Aragorn as indomitable, and the determination and loyalty of both Faramir and Eomer. The Lady Saborian was a credible villian, and most of all, your wonderful OC Vlohiri. I will look forward to your sequel. | |
| TieAillin Alcarion | Reviewed Chapter: 10 on 5/21/2004 |
| GREAT story! I can't wait for the sequel! I'm glad Vlohiri got to go with Aragorn. Smiles, TieAillin | |