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| Magnificent by Pervinca | 4 Review(s) |
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| powerwriter | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 6/3/2004 |
| Doing a wonderful job so far! Keep it up :) Can't wait to get the next chapter! | |
| RogerGamgee | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 5/25/2004 |
| Pervinca, For a 'filler chapter', as you call it, this was really quite entertaining. Sam and Rose seem to be quite the married couple...I still chuckle at Sam's talk about 'the right timing'. It'll be interesting to see how Diamond faces her fears at Bag End. I look forward to seeing how this story progresses. Good work! Author Reply: Thanks Roger :) I'm a firm believer that if a chapter has to be a filler, then it should at least be a little entertaining, even if it's just a humorous little piece. To be honest, I wasn't completely sure about Sam's "the right timing" comment, but I figured it was subtle enough for him. Sam never struck me as someone to be particularly blantant about such things :P - Pervinca | |
| Hai Took | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 5/25/2004 |
| Poor, Diamond, it is terrible that she can't enjoy Bag End under new management! I hope that she is able to get it all in the open then there won't be any hard feelings. I like how you wrote Pippin playing with Ellie and holding Frodo! It does seem like he would be one to play with the kids, I liked this "Merry laughed. “Gracious, Sam, don’t say such things. I would never submit my children to such horror.”' Looking forward to more! Author Reply: She'll have to go the Bag-End eventually, and I do have something planned for that :D And, yes, good old Uncle Pippin is certainly the King of the Kids! I could always imagine him being that way, and making a great Dad :) Thanks for reading, I'm glad you're enjoying it. - Pervinca | |
| Arwens pet hamster | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 5/25/2004 |
| Yay, it's really good! I'm enjoying this story just as much as your others! You just have a way of writing, that brings the story to life and makes it as real as Tolkiens original. I can't wait to read some more. Keep it up! Author Reply: I'm trying to write this fairly quickly so that I can get to the parts that I think will be good :P Shouldn't be too long now. I'm glad you're enjoying this one. I know it doesn't quite have a clear direction at the moment, but I will get there eventually! - Pervinca | |