| Beauty for Ashes by Nina the powerwriter | 3 Review(s) |
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| Ariel | Reviewed Chapter: Prologue on 2/9/2006 |
I read this prologue ages ago, but never realized you went further with it! Thank you! I just finished my own Merry/Estella and am intrigued to see your take - the beginning was promising then and still.
One question though - I see the formatting of the document is very strange. It looks like you have too many hard returns in it breaking up the lines. Is that something you could edit? It would make it easier to read. |
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| Dreamflower | Reviewed Chapter: Prologue on 10/5/2004 |
| Very interesting and different take on Fredegar. Good beginning; sets up your situation well. |
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| trishette | Reviewed Chapter: Prologue on 7/11/2004 |
| Oh, those poor hobbits, being obliged to watch the slow deterioration of their parent! =o( |
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