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| Blanketed in Love by TopazTook | 4 Review(s) |
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| Pearl Took | Reviewed Chapter: 15 on 6/7/2004 |
| This was a wonderful look into Pippin's thoughts and how adults must look sometimes to children. Well done!! Author Reply: Thank you. I'm glad it worked for you. I knew I wanted "silent Pippin" to do the internal narration for at least one chapter of this fic, but I had a struggle to maintain the same little hobbit "voice" I'd used for him earlier - I'm still not sure I'm entirely satsified. Plus, when he did try to narrate to me, he tends to tell a story in circles. | |
| pipinheart | Reviewed Chapter: 15 on 6/7/2004 |
| Really like it. Pippin seems so lonly, I feel for him. Frodo seems a bit frustrated and not really sure what to do. Pippins dad finially picks him up,pippin misses his family,but I wonder what awaits him at home. good story,update soon... Author Reply: Hmm, well I think you may have picked up on some of how Frodo feels -- he's not used to little hobbits, as Pippin notices. Of course, part of that could also be from an author who was having an especially hard time writing Bagginses in this chapter. | |
| Elenar | Reviewed Chapter: 15 on 6/7/2004 |
| Poor Pippin. I can't wait for him to get better. I love Paladin showing up at the end. Great chapter. Author Reply: Glad you liked it. Thank you. | |
| Auntiemeesh | Reviewed Chapter: 15 on 6/6/2004 |
| So I’m eating lots because I want to get big and strong and Mama always says “a hungry hobbit is a healthy hobbit” and I don’t want to be broken no more. I want Pippin to get fixed, I do! Poor wee, helpless, angry, sad, frightened little Pippin. I'm really enjoying this fic :) Author Reply: Thank you! He will get fixed before this fic is done. I'm enjoying "A New Kind of Courage", too. | |