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The Forest Has Eyes  by Budgielover 13 Review(s)
Timmy2222Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 9/20/2004
Ah, here we go! Among the tension rising, you managed to slip in the little humorous notes I love dearly: "The altitude must directly effect their brains." And all that nice stroking and caring for the wounded Elf. - Hobbits can be so lovely when written by a gifted hand...

I hope the hunters won't strip any of them... could be embarrassing beyond the fact of them finding the Ring. And I wonder if the Fellowship is indeed so far away from them. Could the Hobbits and Legolas have strayed so far into the woods that Aragorn and the others won't reach them in time?

- T.

elf-girlReviewed Chapter: 2 on 7/27/2004
I just want to tell you that your story looks pretty good.I am a great fan of the lord of the rings.
English is not my native language, I am from Chile,South america and I speak Spanish.
Bye!!!
Elf-girl

Tapetum LucidumReviewed Chapter: 2 on 6/13/2004
I am a big Legolas fan and I love this so far!

Having the poor wood elf fall from the tree was a mean way to get him injured! How embarrassing! Only the hobbits could get him to climb a dead tree. If Frodo turned those baby blues on anyone they would surely follow him to Mordor. I love the halfling interaction so far and their concern over the wounded comrade. Having the bad, bad men come in was a nice addition. Looking forward to your next chapter.

BodkinReviewed Chapter: 2 on 6/13/2004
Poor suffering Legolas. I might have known that along would come the baddies. I was just thinking - I can't remember all that many bad men in the original (except as armies). Yet there must have been lots. I hope the suffering doesn't go on for too long - those warriors should be quite close by now, and I recall the hobbits making a pretty good show in parts of R in R (among others of your tales). Go for it, Sam - shame you do not have your frying pan handy. Use the slings. Show them small doesn't mean defenceless! Save the elf.

Looking forward to the next part.

Jay of LasgalenReviewed Chapter: 2 on 6/13/2004
Oh dear. This Is Not Good. And it's strange how the man knows so much about the Shire, and who Legolas's father is. A ransom? As I said, This Is Not Good!

Jay

Sigil GalenReviewed Chapter: 2 on 6/13/2004
I'm really adoring the interaction between the hobbits and Legolas in this fic. I always love your hobbits, but seeing them through Legolas' eyes makes them seem even more endearing somehow. And hey, I thought this was just a small humerous piece, but it looks like we've got an adventure on our hands! Excllent, can't wait for an update.

ElenarReviewed Chapter: 2 on 6/12/2004
Very exciting, can't wait for more.

natReviewed Chapter: 2 on 6/12/2004
oh no! this does not bode well...where's aragorn when u need him? he he he update soon!

Pearl TookReviewed Chapter: 2 on 6/12/2004
Oh my! We are in for quite a ride, I see. Wonderful angsty start. You've got me hooked.

Lily BagginsReviewed Chapter: 2 on 6/12/2004
Oh my goodness, this was great... so far this story is among my favorites of yours. Lando and Billeh? Hee . . . very funny. And the hobbits' concern for Legolas is so sweet and adorable and gah---how come I don't have hobbits here caring for me?

And the others' disbelief that Legolas fell out of a tree . . . you manage to put good, subtle humor in all your stories, and I love that so much.

But of course, my favorite thing is the nasty, nasty ruffians---ugh, they're so hideous and without any honor and the lead one --- Harlan --- seems to have ulterior motives regarding Frodo. jjffdkdghghghhdddss!!!! You have to KNOW how much I love stories in which Frodo is at the seeming mercy of a big bad ruffian guy, who leers at him, with the others in the Fellowship concerned . . . it really made my day to read that part. Honestly.

Now, WHY do I have a feeling Aragorn and company won't be showing up at the exact opportune moment?

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