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| Pervinca's Poetry by Pervinca | 2 Review(s) |
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| Dreamflower | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/13/2004 |
| This is wonderful! And you were only thirteen? I still have a lot of the poetry I wrote in my teen years, and most of it is atrocious. I have to say that I appreciate poetry with *structure*--I like rhyme schemes and rules. You've done splendidly! Author Reply: Yes, I still have most of my writings from my younger years, all piled up in a shoebox, and there they will probably remain. This one was such a difficult rhyme scheme to use, so thank you for letting me know you thought it was all right! Though I like poetic structure, I usually tend to stick to either limericks or the more basic rhymes. - Pervinca | |
| PIppinfan1988 | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/13/2004 |
| Hey, you were a young teen and obviously a very talented one, at that! Don't apologize--though I was a bit taken back with "breed him"!...lol. This is great! Pippinfan Author Reply: Lol, I've had "breed him" picked up by several people - mind you, my english teacher never said anything about it. He was rather strange :P (In fact, he reminded me a little of Gandalf!). Talented? Me? I wonder what happened :P - Pervinca (P.S. I thought you're little "pervincalovesmerimas" hint at the botton of you lj reply was very cute :P Doesn't quite have the same ring as pervincalovesev though) | |