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| Tell This Mortal by Chathol-linn | 4 Review(s) |
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| Ooooh!! | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 8/15/2004 |
| BRAVO! Wonderful ending!! Creepy about that invisible "hand" thingy.... Well, I'm off to read the next one!! Author Reply: Glad you liked the creepy cold hand. I did my very best to make it chilling. Regards - Chathol-linn | |
| Lamiel | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 6/15/2004 |
| This continues to impress. I do like Gimli's warning not to trouble Legolas further, and the consequences of such a foolish action. "Once a fearsome warrior..." ha. He's still more than strong enough to take you on, missy. I'm looking forward to more. Author Reply: Way to go, Lamiel! We have a common understanding of the character of a Dwarf. I love hearing your comments. The story is just about halfway done, in terms of both word count and chapters. Thanks again. Regards - Chathol-linn | |
| daw the minstrel | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 6/15/2004 |
| This is utterly wonderful. Your sail-maker is so alive in her mix of confusion and self-possession. Gimli's threat introduces Legolas's "trouble" with just the right tone, and I loved the fact that she remembered who "Gimli" was just in the nick of time. Author Reply: daw, your sense of story telling and characterization never fails to amaze me. I hope everyone has read your shortie "Watch This!" for a good illustration of those traits. Best regards - Chathol-linn | |
| Rose Sared | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 6/15/2004 |
| Oh, how did I miss this wonderful tale? I am enjoying the unravelling- such a bitter sweet tone, It's great. More, soon, often, she demands greedily! Well done. Rose Author Reply: Rose Sared, I am so pleased that you like the story. How right you are about a bittersweet tone as the most famous Elf of the Third Age says farewell. It is definitely how I feel. Regards - Chathol-linn | |