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The Only Love-Gods by Melyanna | 5 Review(s) |
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Raven of Rohan | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 6/17/2004 |
My! This is cruel! Make him believe she´s dead. I wonder how you´ll manage to get Eomer to trust Lothiriel after such a prank. Do I have to say that I´m eagerly waiting for your next chapter?! Come on, give it to me:) Author Reply: Well, there are trust issues all around. ;) | |
Hisie Lome | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 6/17/2004 |
What an evil author you must be to leave us with this cliffy.... Well done. Minna Sedh Hisie Lome Author Reply: That wasn't a cliffy. ;) | |
daw the minstrel | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 6/17/2004 |
Sigh. These two are going to have to go a long way to redeem themselves in my book. There are enough unavoidable sorrows in this world that we don't really need people going around creating their own. You do a good job of showing the tension between Faramir and Eomer. I can't believe Lothiriel or Imrahil would let Faramir suffer this way. Author Reply: Yeah, they're both being immature prats right now. :p I've spent a lot of time working out the resolution of this story, so hopefully it'll work out to everyone's satisfaction — reader and characters alike. | |
eokat | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 6/17/2004 |
Oh, what a place to leave it. I am sorry that Faramir is grieving also, maybe he should have been in on the plan? But I do not know your plot...YET. This is going to be hard to resolve, both will be very mistrustful of each other, Eomer always leads with anger first. Keep going. Love it. Eokat. Author Reply: I've spent a lot of time on this part of the plot, so hopefully the resolution will make sense. Hopefully. ;) | |
Bodkin | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 6/17/2004 |
Lothiriel as Hero. I can understand the desire to torture Eomer - he deserves a bit of torment. But it is a shame Faramir is suffering, though. Eomer is in the early throes of lust and jealousy, but to Faramir she is the girl he has loved from her infancy. (If Lothiriel is Hero, does that make Eowyn Beatrice? She doesn't seem to the right qualities to me.) Good story - I look forward to updates. Author Reply: No, Éowyn's not Beatrice. It's actually rather difficult at this point to match up characters for each of the LotR characters — they're just kind of being themselves, which is, I suppose, a good thing. | |