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| Jay's Drabblets by Jay of Lasgalen | 2 Review(s) |
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| LKK | Reviewed Chapter: 14 on 6/18/2004 |
| Oropher's regret is palpable, Jay. You really made him come alive, if you will pardon my bad taste in word choice. I liked how he feel guilt not only over his warriors' deaths and Thranduil being left alone but over his decision as well. Good job! Author Reply: Oropher is usually portrayed as hotheaded and rash in the way he led the charge before the signal had been given. I wanted to show why he did it, and his regret. | |
| Bodkin | Reviewed Chapter: 14 on 6/18/2004 |
| Poor Thranduil - a disaster that led to his resentment against the other realms. And what a way for Oropher to learn that there is some purpose to strategy. Author Reply: One day I'd like to write the story of Thranduil's experiences in that battle and his return home. Only one third went back with him. Oropher should have listened! | |