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Drabbles  by Acacea 3 Review(s)
BranwynReviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/15/2005
I liked the image of the terraced gardens of the City. Poor Denethor! Spring is near but he can see nothing but ruin. Too easy for readers to forget how little time had elapsed between the news of Boromir's death and Gandalf's arrival--thanks for showing Denethor's viewpoint.

Author Reply: Yup:( He must have had some hope from Boromir's journey and then to realise that Boromir would not even return must have been a hard blow.

mirthorReviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/13/2005
Funny how even though the citizens know war is coming to their door, spring is still able to bring hope, false or not. I liked the imagery of the white tree.

Author Reply: Yes, I figured at that point in time they'd have clung to any sign of hope, however little...

Glad the imagery of the white tree worked:)

thanks for reviewing:)

LindorienReviewed Chapter: 2 on 6/20/2004
Yes, you made me tear up. Are you happy now?


Author Reply: I'm happy:)

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