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| Blood of the Bullroarer by Pervinca | 2 Review(s) |
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| Lyta Padfoot | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 6/22/2004 |
| I imagine Lobelia would have been an awful mother-in-law. Miranda Bracegirdle is probably someone she can control, Diamond is someone she really cannot. The lullaby was heartbreaking. Author Reply: You're very clever :P I hadn't thought of the whole control issue, but now I might work it into the story. Thank you for that! - Pervinca | |
| Willow | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 6/22/2004 |
| Aaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. It's so sad! Are you determined to make everybody who reads it cry?! It's still really good though. I thought it was a really sweet little touch of yours to have it be pippins room that she was staying in. Can't wait for more, love rosy Author Reply: The idea of it being Pippin's room was a random thought that came to me while I was writing. I was going to build on it, but then I decided against it. I didn't mean for this chapter to be so sad, though. - Pervinca | |