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| Orcs, Dungeons and Little Sisters. by eokat | 3 Review(s) |
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| SimplegirlfromLP | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 6/2/2019 |
| I love that Theodwyn is so feisty and yet she still is soft and tender and that her fearsome warrior husband is just a wee bit fearful of dealing with his formidable wife. | |
| EomerofEastfold | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 6/30/2004 |
| I don't know, Eokat. There was some great content in this chapter, but it all seemed to fly by so fast. I think there's enough here that you concentrate on certain moments more, like Eomund telling Theodwyn that someone else will be taking care of the children, and maybe come up with enough to split this into two short chapters or go for one long one. Anyway, glad to see Theodwyn is going to recover. It would be really angsty if she stayed ill for the next three years. Author Reply: I had to see Theodwyn recover, Eomer, as you say it would have been TOO much. I have taken on board your other comments. Eokat. | |
| daw the minstrel | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 6/28/2004 |
| I can see the future Eowyn in this Theodwyn, and that's good, I think. I liked the image of the little boy creeping into the king's bed with his undoubtedly icy feet. They tend to sprawl all over the place too. How nice fof Theoden! Author Reply: Yes, Daw, Eowyn is certainly her mothers daughter. I have to agree, thinking back to my own son at that age, yes they do sprawl all over the bed. Eokat | |