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The Forest Has Eyes  by Budgielover 14 Review(s)
vrbxBUPFqEESReviewed Chapter: 3 on 2/9/2012
April 29, 2011 at 6:01 amnice work. all text etceffs are creative. “Slow-Shutter Effect”, “Advanced Glow Effects” and “Layered Glowing Text Effect” are really creative. Reply

Elendiari22Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 8/13/2004
Holy heaven to Betsey, Budgie! This is great! Very suspenseful, and I can tell that it's going to be an excellent tale. One of my friends mentioned to me today that she read it, and I realized that I hadn't yet! So, I read it and now I'm reviewing. :)
I like that the hobbits are so tender with everyone. Their treatment of Legolas was so endearing.
The men named Lando and Billeh made me laugh. For some odd reason, I immediately pictured Orlando and Billy. Did you do that on purpose?
Your Aragorn and Gandalf are wonderful. I love how you write them.
Looking forward to more! Thanks!

elf-girlReviewed Chapter: 3 on 7/27/2004
Please write more!!! I am dying for read more.

Templa OtmenaReviewed Chapter: 3 on 7/17/2004
I am very excited about this fic. You've written the hobbits' and the elf wonderfully and I can't wait to see what happens next!
UPDATE SOON!

Pearl TookReviewed Chapter: 3 on 7/17/2004
Wonderful!! Exciting!! I'm all on edge, Pippin and I both with fire in our eyes. We'll go get those wicked men!! I'm loving this.

LindeleaReviewed Chapter: 3 on 7/14/2004
Frodo using a voice Pippin had never heard before, such a nice touch.

Merry whispering to Sam about the bathwater--perfect!

Your writing is simply amazing, as always, and I look forward to the next chapter.

ElenarReviewed Chapter: 3 on 7/13/2004
That was very exciting. I can't wait for more.

ElwenReviewed Chapter: 3 on 7/13/2004
Frodo the thinker. I like that. He always came across as the thoughtful one in Tolkien's work and it's good to see you using that. Too many fanfic writers forget that he is a wise hobbit.

And your Sam is so brave and determined. And some Legolas angst too. (That's not as good as Frodo angst, you understand, but I'm sure you won't disappoint me on that one. ;) )

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 3 on 7/13/2004
Budgie, are you trying to keep me in a perpetual state of nerves and nail biting? Did Frodo keep Pippin from saying "Took" to the Men because Pippin would be a valuable hostage if they knew who he was? If so, that was incredibly quick-thinking of Frodo (and Budgie).

Too much suspense... must have more... *starts munching on another nail*

Annis Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 7/13/2004
Great! full of angst and suspense. I can't wait for more!

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