Faramir is looking closely: at Beregond, at Elessar, for signs that they despair. He doesn't find either of them looking for death, but what will he do when he sees Eowyn, who clearly is?
There's a lot of high drama in this section of the book, and your chapter reflects it well. You also continue to do a wonderful job of using the movie storyline and visuals but adding the deeper richness of book canon. Such a tricky thing, and you're doing it so well. I'm eager to see the events before the Black Gate through your eyes. |