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| Torn in Two by Mysterious Jedi | 1 Review(s) |
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| GamgeeFest | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 8/4/2004 |
| I liked it. Short and sweet. I believe Sam may have had his suspicions. Certainly he knew Frodo wasn't completely well as he should be. You may want to fix one sentence that got chopped in half by the A/N at the end: "Sam thought , I wouldn’t presume to have foresight like elves and such, but I think I’ll see him again before the end, even after he leaves, if he even does." It looks like it's supposed to be part of the story. :) Author Reply: Oops, you're right, that part got put in the wrong place somehow. Thank you for calling that to my attention, and for your kind words. | |