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| Do not go gentle into that good night by frodo16424 | 1 Review(s) |
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| RAKSHA THE DEMON | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 8/6/2004 |
| The story seems much improved, the plot is tighter. I'd like to see Aragorn visit Faramir in the Houses of Healing. Minor quibble - if Bergil is now a "man"; then Elrond cannot be in Minas Tirith to be one of Faramir's healers; he sailed to Valinor about four years after the War of the Ring (in the movie; in the book it was two years later). His sons could definitely be visiting Gondor; no one knows when, or if, they left Middle-earth. Keep updating! | |