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My Dear Bandobras  by Le Rouret 6 Review(s)
DuchessReviewed Chapter: 13 on 8/10/2004
Oh boy, she's a freakin' TEENAGER and already has a crush on Legolas from his physical description? *shaking my head* Oh dear... Other than that, she doesn't sound TOO bad... if you ignore the whole spoiled brat sounding facade. LOL

*wincing* Crap! What's gonna happen now? MORE please?!?

JoanaReviewed Chapter: 13 on 8/10/2004
I really like this story and the way it is written. I don't really like reviewing but I thought I should, and so I will from now on. Keep writing! :)

Ms. WhatsitReviewed Chapter: 13 on 8/10/2004
Me again. But are you planning to match him with Nardanė? That would be an interesting twist.

Ms. WhatsitReviewed Chapter: 13 on 8/10/2004
Uh-oh. This girl is a silly romantic flirt! I anticipate trouble ahead.

At least she won't ensnare Legolas, though.

LamielReviewed Chapter: 13 on 8/10/2004
Whiny little brat, isn't she? Complaining about the food and drink, and flaunting herself about melodramatically for every one to see... mind, I was biased against her from the start, so I guess she really never had a fair chance with me. Oh well. I'm not going to lose sleep over that.

Well, the eagle has landed, so they say. Now Legolas just needs to greet her politely and send her packing back to Cirdan. Or better yet, let her fall for some handsome retainer of his who can appreciate her, er, charms better. Let them match up and get her off Legolas' hands.

Oh, and by the way, if you're interested there is a group that matches authors with beta readers. I can try to find the address for you. I'd offer to beta myself, if you like, but you're such a prolific author that I fear I'd only slow you down.

BodkinReviewed Chapter: 13 on 8/10/2004
All he needs is a star-struck Noldor Mary-Sue. I'm afraid Laustairė does not sound the right sort of bride for Legolas. In fact Nardanė sounds much more suitable.

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