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The Wrong Path  by White Wolf 4 Review(s)
NikaraReviewed Chapter: 4 on 11/23/2003
Grr... That is a horrible cliffy! I can't believe that you left off there! Poor Estel. I hope that you add to this soon, you have left me desparate for more!

Author Reply: Well, I see that my horrible cliffy has succeeded. They make good grabbers to bring desperate readers back. :o) However, I think the story itself has a lot more to do with that than cliffies, and I'm trying hard to give everyone a good read.

How's tomorrow for the next update?

Orophins DottirReviewed Chapter: 4 on 11/23/2003
You CANNOT do this to me! I leave town Tuesday morning and will have no access to a computer until Saturday evening. You must get me off this cliffie before then. ARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRGH!!

*draws a deep and calming breath as befits a resident of Taur-E-Ndaedelos*

Excellent chapter. Broke my heart, and I am considering revenge upon you, but still excellent.

Humble Scribe to this Majesty Thranduil

Author Reply: I'm happy you liked the chapter.

I hate that you will have to wait so long to find out what is happening to Legolas. I am updating tomorrow afternoon, US Central Time. Please don't seek retribution. I promise all will be revealed---eventually. :o)

If you are an American, I wish you a happy and safe Thanksgiving.

EruannaReviewed Chapter: 4 on 11/23/2003
*gasp* WHATHAPPENSWHATHAPPENSWHATHAPPENS!!! I love this brilliant piece of writing! The plot line develops extremely well, and I happen to LOVE Legolas angst. (Can't help it; it's a sadistic pleasure.) ;-) Anyway, wonderful portrayal of Aragorn's character. I too loved the 'something light' quote. Pippin would indeed be most pleased. The story is evolving in a breathtakingly mysterious way. Nice cliff hangers. Poor Legolas! Post soon!

Author Reply: Thandk you for the complement on my writing. I try hard to be entertaining.

Speaking of the food thing, I just recieved and watched the exptende version of TTT. I love the bit at the end with Maery and Piooin and the floating apples. Too bad that wasn't in the theatrical release. My favorite part, also left out, was the funny bit where Legolas and Gimli 'settle' their count of enemies killed at Helm's Deep. That was a riot. Oops. I digress.

I hope you find the rest of the story appealing. It's a long and bumpy ride, with much angst, humor, horror and surpises.

Author Reply: Please forgive the typos. My fingers and my Spell Checker went on vacation. I, of course, know how to spell Merry and Pippin.

SivanReviewed Chapter: 4 on 11/23/2003
O.k. now you'll have to update soon.

Another cliffy, but please hurry up and update soon.

I still love what I read,

Sivan Shemesh

Author Reply: I'm glad you are loving the story. I will update soon, so you will know what is happening, just not why---yet. I must keep some of the mystery going. :o)

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