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The Wrong Path  by White Wolf 5 Review(s)
OakWolfReviewed Chapter: 5 on 3/2/2004
WOW. that's all that can desrcibe that chapter-wow......

Author Reply: WOW is great. Thanks.

I forgot to mention in my first reply that I'm happy to welcome a fellow lupine.

Orophins DottirReviewed Chapter: 5 on 11/30/2003
Frightening. The fear of all is palpable. Please continue!

Author Reply: Glad you thought it was frightening. That was my intent.

I will definitely continue.

SivanReviewed Chapter: 5 on 11/26/2003
Nice chapter, you continued this very good, now please hurry up with the next chapter.

I still love what I read,

Sivan

Author Reply: I'm glad you are still loving it. Naturally, I hope you will think it gets better, as it does along.

I'll update when I return from my trip.

NikaraReviewed Chapter: 5 on 11/25/2003
Who is the he? Legolas? Aragorn? Elrond? I personally suspect the last one. Great chapter. Where exactly did all of that blood come from? Internal bleeding, of just severe biting of the lip? More soon please!

Author Reply: Glad you like the chapter.

There's a clue who the 'he' is in the part about Mordraug, if you want to look for it. If not, don't worry. It will be revealed in a later chapter.

With Legolas clawing around inside his mouth, it's for certain, in my mind anyway, that he opened up a few blood vessels that bled freely.

If all goes as planned, I'll be updating on Dec. 3rd.

sofiaReviewed Chapter: 5 on 11/25/2003
wow. i love how the story's comin along... with the blood from legolas it made the story creepy & even more better.

Author Reply: I'm glad you like the progress the story is making.

I wanted the part with the blood to be a bit of a shock. Wait until you find out what is behind it all.

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