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| The Wrong Path by White Wolf | 5 Review(s) |
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| Orophins Dottir | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 12/11/2003 |
| Oh, No! Here we go again, Legolas! Will thy fair person e'er be out of danger in Arda? Well, at least Ada knows what's going on. This looks to be quite frightening. Anything that gets the Balrog Slayer's voice to tremble is definitely a problem. Great chapter! Kill my liege or his son, though, and you face WAR! Humble Scribe to his Majesty Thranduil Author Reply: No, I don't think Legolas will ever be out of danger. After all, where's the fun in that? Poor baby. The whole Mordraug/snake thing is going to get even more frightening, so hang on. Yes, Glorfindel was greatly affected by what happened. War? Gulp. I think I'll run away now. Oh, one last thing: I just posted Chapter Ten. Now, I'm leaving. | |
| Sivan | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 12/10/2003 |
| Wonderful chapter, at least we got some answers. I love how you did the conflicts between the fathers. I still love what I read so far. Please update soon. Sivan Author Reply: Glad you liked the chapter. More answers to come and a surprise revelation. I know that both Thranduil and Elrond have such different personalities and they clash, so this won't be their last conflict, believe me. But, they are also both loving fathers Did you get my e-mail about the nomination? | |
| Nikara | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 12/9/2003 |
| Ah, finally some answers. Not that I like the answers, but some answers none the less. Nice job. Keep it up! Author Reply: More answers and a big surprise in the next chapter. You probably won't like the surprise. It is heartbreaking. I can say no more. :o) | |
| Eruanna | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 12/9/2003 |
| *gasp* Completely speechless... I am in awe of this chapter! But I do hope that Thranduil can accept Estel eventually... Poor Aragorn. You had me captivated with Elrond's narrative. Poor Legolas. And to think they all saw this. Poor Elrond. You're not being very nice to your characters. ;-) One of my favorite parts was the very last sentence... 'We were all there.' Completely unanticipated, (by me anyway; but I am usually pretty slow on the uptake), and a perfect but evil way to end the section. Chilling! More please! Author Reply: Yes, chilling was just what I was going far. It will go beyond that in the future, so stay tuned. I like being cruel to my characters and then being kind to them. It makes for a great contrast. You'll see what I mean, as the story goes along. I'll give you a hint: there's a big surprise in the next chapter. Then, you'll really be saying, poor Legolas and poor Thranduil. | |
| sofia | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 12/9/2003 |
| this one was really good! with the snake and them finding it out. very intense. Author Reply: Intensity is one of my middle names. Glad you liked it. I also like humor, and there will be some of that, too, in this story. | |