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| The Wrong Path by White Wolf | 3 Review(s) |
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| *~SuGaR~* | Reviewed Chapter: 24 on 1/23/2004 |
| oh...well, how dandy!!!! now Mordraug is going to use his pretty little time until the others show up!!! what a nice way to end a chapter!!!(i'm serious about that...) i can just imagine the look of stricken fear on Legolas' face when he found that Mordraug knew...POOR LEGOLAS!!!!!!! Legolas should just go kick his *** rite now...though with that snake it might be kinda hard...and Legolas might see that as another weakness...stubborn elf, always trying to be perfect(although he already is, at least to me =) hehe...) luved Mordurag getting mad at Elrond to...hehehehe...well, NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!...then i'll have to wait again, without exams to distract me...argh! *~SuGaR~* | |
| Eruanna | Reviewed Chapter: 24 on 1/20/2004 |
| *GASP* Hyperventilating, hyperventilating! Well, where does one start? The thought hadn't struck me as I read Legolas' "empahtic declaration", but when I read Mordraug's musings about whether or not Legolas was aware of his condition, I realized that Legolas' dialogue and tone kind of made him sound like a snobby, over-confident prince. That was well done! Did Legolas intend that? *Pride comes before a fall* How very true that is. AHHHHHH!!! HE KNOWS!!!!! WHAT DO WE DO? WHAT DO WE DO? *smacks herself* *silly, you don't *do* anything! You wait for the merciless *author* to do something!* Poor, poor, Legolas. My POOR X 500 baby! *I wish I had thought of that* Boy, I know how that goes. I've said that several times aloud while reading this story! Sometimes, though, I think of things on my own that I am really happy with. Sometimes. Then there's novel things like getting punched in the face by Joy. ;-) More please! Author Reply: I hate to admit this, but I'm not really sure if Legolas meant to sound so snobby. On one hand, I think he did. He's not above using that to his advantage in certain situations But, on the other hand, being raised a prince has got to filter into his subconscious a bit, so that attitude comes out without thinking. He's much humbler than Thranduil, for sure, but he is also Thranduil's son. I hope that is a little clearer than mud. Merciless author? Ouch. I hope you meant that in a nice way. :o) More Thursday, if time permits. If not, Friday for sure. | |
| Sivan | Reviewed Chapter: 24 on 1/19/2004 |
| More please... I still love what I read, but you need to update soon, you know that. I love your fic, that is why I'm so interested to read it. (I know the feeling) I start to write Dark fics, and I'm enjoyed it, I getting a lot of reviews, and the funny thing, I've got 1 review to my PG-13, for the last chapter that I added lately. Enouth numbling, I must be bored you. I know the feeling, and I love your story, very MUCH. Keep up the PERFECT fic, and yes, it is perfect. Sivan Author Reply: Again I think you for the compliment that you love my story. I will update tomorrow, if all goes well. I will be busy, but I think I can work it in. I never get tired of talking to reviewers. I will read your story the first chance I get. I promise. I'm actually looking forward to it. :o) | |