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The Wrong Path  by White Wolf 4 Review(s)
*~SuGaR~*Reviewed Chapter: 33 on 2/18/2004
art? yeah, it's actually something I'm pretty good at, although comparing my work to some others...I'm not so sure anymore...but I can draw a straight line with a ruler!!! YES!!!! my sister claims to be unable to do that as well =) but no one in my family is really artsy, my aunt's kinda crafty but other than that, I guess it just came out of nowhere...? I can't draw realistic people though, which really sucks but Legolas as cartoons will have to do! I wish I had a scanner...argh!

well, what can I say...=S...we finally get to Rivendell, Legolas wakes up (didn't expect you to have him wake up this chapter, but works for me!)and now he can't talk!?!?!?! now that was something I hadn't anticipated...out of all the problems, the first we see (or rather hear) is he can't talk! He's not like a baby now cause he knows what he wants to say...did his tongue happen to go funny like all his other muscles??? Maybe Elrond should start working on that snake...hopefully he'll find somthing that'll help Legolas!! Positive thinking!! That's the key!! But now Thranduil starting to get angry...that can't be good...ack!!! MY POOR LEGOLAS!!!!!!!!! what else are they going to do to you!!!!!!!!!!!! I know this torture is far from over and knowing you it'll probably get worse than not being able to talk!!!! eep!!!!!!!! MY POOR, TORTURED ELF!!!!!!!(yeah, he's my elf =)...heh)

well, even though I hate my poor elf being subject to all this torture POST SOON!!!!!!!!!!

*~SuGaR~*



Author Reply: I have a scanner, but fat lot of good that does you, right?

Oh, but Legolas can talk. He just doesn't make any sense. It's very frustrating to be able to think in your head what you want to say and then have only gibberish come out. Thranduil is not a happy camper right now. He has been through the emotional ringer of late, as have they all, of course.. Legolas's problem has nothing to do with his tongue. You'll find out soon.

More torture to come? Oh my, yes. Poor Legolas probably wishes Peter Jacdson had never heard of him, or that Tolkien had made Elrond choose some other elf to join the Fellowship. Not even the strongest elf in Middle-earth could survive what we writers put him through. Poor baby.

SivanReviewed Chapter: 33 on 2/18/2004
'From bad to worse' - riddle, that look fitting to your story, but I still love it.

I still love what I read, please update soon.

Keep up the PERFECT work that you are doing with your story.

Sivan

Author Reply: Thank you, as always. I don't know if things are worse than dying a horrible death, but its definitely not much better for sure. Our poor elf does have problems.

I'll keep at it.

Theresa S.Reviewed Chapter: 33 on 2/18/2004
Good story! Keep it up. Can't wait till the next chapter!

Author Reply: Thank you very much and welcome to the story. Rest assured. I will keep it up until the story is told.

I try to update every three or four days.

sofiaReviewed Chapter: 33 on 2/17/2004
Im glad that they finally reached Imladris. And that Legolas woke up. But now he cant really talk. Oh NO!

Author Reply: Oh, yes. Our dear elf will have more problems before the story is done.

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