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The Wrong Path  by White Wolf 5 Review(s)
*~SuGaR~*Reviewed Chapter: 45 on 4/11/2004
inhale...exhale...deep breathes...

sorry, but I have to find some way to keep myself from screaming...*sigh* we've got a long way to go...

I was ecstatic when Elrond asked Legolas what the real problem was at the end of the last chapter, but that didn't last too long. I knew you'd never let him off that easily and stupid Mordraug!!!! SO MEAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!! At least the twins and Estel know something's wrong too, Estel knowing has to be a good thing, but with you...nothing is a good thing =P But even if they find out, what are they going to do?!?!?!?!?!?!? *sigh* Legolas is just falling right into this little trap...argh...you just have to make him so ignorant sometimes!!!!! Now I want to scream at him even more...*sigh* yep, we've still got a long way to go...

*~SuGaR~*

Author Reply: Yes, breathing is a good thing. And yes, we have a long way to go.

Legolas can be so maddening sometimes, but then Mordraug isn't going to give him too many breaks. I just know you aren't really expecting me to say what will be done, if anything *can* be done. Right? :o)

Yes, a long way to go indeed.

LossenchristalReviewed Chapter: 45 on 4/10/2004
Oh dear, poor Legolas is getting worse and worse.:( I just hope that Elrond and the others can figure out what is wrong, if Legolas won't tell them! That Mordraug is so creepy, I do not like him at all!!:/ Good chapter though:), please continue soon!:)
Namarië.
~Lossenchristal

Author Reply: Legolas is slowly, or maybe not so slowly, sinking into Mordraug's trap. The dark elf is creepy, isn't he? That was what I was aiming for. I'm glad I succeeded in your opinion. I don't think there's much in him to like.

Thank you. I'm updating tomorrow (Wednesday).

SivanReviewed Chapter: 45 on 4/9/2004
Well he did left him for few moments, and then back at the end of the chapter, did he?

Aragorn is going to talk hard with Legolas, as he got the excuse with the food.

I still love what I read, as I still very enjoy reading it.

Keep up the PERFECT work that you are doing with your fic, and don't ever to think to stop writing it, not until it complete, understood? lol!

Sivan

Author Reply: Legolas is very stubborn, as well as being very much under Mordraug's influence. He needs to find the will to trust his friends.

Understood. I will not stop writing until I finish the story.

daw the minstrelReviewed Chapter: 45 on 4/9/2004
Oh my, poor Legolas. He's being fooled so deeply. I can see how concerned the others are, and I am worried about that wet balcony myself.

Author Reply: Yes, the poor baby. His friends are wanting so desperately to help him, but the stubborn boy just keeps it all in and is being swayed by Mordraug's arguments for every thought Legolas has. Meanwhile, he is getting more and more confused.

sofiaReviewed Chapter: 45 on 4/9/2004
will Legolas ever tell anyone whats goin on inside his head anytime soon? Love how the story's coming along. Hope next chapter is up soon!
-sofia

Author Reply: Will he tell? Humm. Maybe yes. Maybe no. Now, didn't that make everything clear as mud? :o)

I'm so glad you are liking the storyline. More soon.

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