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By Light Beguiled  by AfterEver 2 Review(s)
BejaiReviewed Chapter: Epilogue on 11/20/2003
Ah, I'm so glad to see this story here! I loved it over on ff.net, and enjoyed reading it again here. Such a unique, unexplored perspective. I especially loved your exploration of the impact the Silmaril had on them. And their grief over their sons is so profoundly heartwrenching. Just a beautiful, brilliantly done story, and one of my very favorites.

Author Reply: Hello again, Bejai -- very glad that you (still) like the story. Every fic should be so lucky as to have a fan like you. :-)
-AE

Elena TirielReviewed Chapter: 1 on 11/18/2003
Hi AE!

I don't have time to read your story tonight, but I thought you might like to know: In your story summary, I believe that "effected" should be "affected". Though "effect" is also a verb, it's not used very often (correctly, that is), and I don't think it makes sense in this particular context. Hope this helps!

- Barbara

Author Reply: Thanks for pointing that out, Elena. Already changed. :-)
-AE

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