| The Grief and Guilt of a Ringbearer by Cantora Eledhwen | 2 Review(s) |
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| Marilla | Reviewed Chapter: Prologue on 11/25/2003 |
| Just a quick suggestion regarding your use of Gandalf's exact lines - you should really indicate that they come directly from the source, to differentiate them from your writing. Although I'd hope that anybody who is reading stuff on this site is at least well enough versed in Tolkien to recognize these lines, I believe it is a standard convention to mark even the most well-known quotations as quotations, either by putting them in italics or referencing them as such a footnote. |
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| JULES6 | Reviewed Chapter: Prologue on 11/20/2003 |
Looking forward to reading more - well done so far. I always like the story surrounding about Frodo's guilt after Gandalf falls in Moria.
JULES |
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