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Shadows Over Lasgalen  by Jay of Lasgalen 3 Review(s)
mistry89Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 4/4/2004
The demonstration that even within the patrol there are different levels of ability, not just skills, but in practice) is great. Dol Guldur would have been considered a threat, and not ignored by the elves, attempts at discovering more of the goings-on there would have been high on their list of priorities - depending on how close they could get without interception by orc or spell or something horrible.
Another shocking place to leave a reader (but I'm lucky, as this is complete!!)
Thank you.

daw the minstrelReviewed Chapter: 3 on 1/25/2004
Very exciting chapter! I would not want to be the one to deliver the news to Thranduil either.

It's always interesting to try to figure out what would be good strategy in these situations. I keep thinking that the Elves would be very clever but danged if I can think of good stuff for them to do. I can see your Legolas working out the best plan he can and it seems good to me, although it evidently did not work out too well.

Yuna_DaxReviewed Chapter: 3 on 1/24/2004
EEEEEEEEKKKKK!!! Poor Legolas, his crafty brave plan backfiring. And his poor horse as well! EEK and double EEK!

Please continue!

Jules AKA Yunadax

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