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Danger in the Dungeon  by jenolas 9 Review(s)
GalathilReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/7/2021
Hi Jenolas
Love the story. I also would not tell a certain eleven king, about the danger in the dungeon.

Galathil

*~SuGaR~*Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/11/2004
hehehehe...luved Legolas and Thranduil's reunion, awwwww!!!!

heh...Legolas is one of the dungeons...hmmm...i can see it now...

great story!!!!...son of an orc...hehe...

*~SuGaR~*

eokatReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/4/2004
Lovely story, especially the reunion with Thranduil and I liked the graffiti written on the walls of the dungeons.

LKKReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/4/2004
I liked this a lot, jenolas.

I wasn't expecting the humor at the end. The tone of the piece was elegant and noble. And the inscription wasn't. The contrast was heightened the humor. Very well done!

LKK

DotReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/4/2004
LOL! Genius… The whole thing was hilarious – I loved lines like “Well, we both know his dungeons are not all that secure, so I suppose I have little to be concerned about,” *snigger* Poor Thranduil will never live that one down….

But the ending was brilliant – not just the runes, which I thought were quite eloquent for a Dwarf really, but the way they are both absolutely horrified at the thought that Thranduil might find out! What an image! Priceless…:)


sofiaReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/4/2004
Danger was in the dungeon was funny and well written.

NilmandraReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/3/2004
LOL - this was great, Jenolas! I liked the visit to Dol Guldur and the little details about their reactions and the flowers already growing there. Meeting the King was great, but the reading of the dwarf runes truly hilarious. Thanks for a fun story.

Author Reply: You are welcome, it was a hoot to write!

calenoreReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/3/2004
LOL! That's great... I'm glad to see that Thranduil is at least outwardly polite to Gimli.

Author Reply: Who knows what he is thinking? :)

daw the minstrelReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/3/2004
That is hilarious! Thranduil would indeed be insulted!

But how nice to see the two friends making their way home. The stop at Dol Guldur was interesting too. Nice job, Jenolas.

Author Reply: Thanks, daw, I am glad you appreciated the humour.

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