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| Deeper Than Skin by Bill-the-Pony | 5 Review(s) |
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| Kellen | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 1/27/2004 |
| Ah, Bill, I am remiss... I realized this morning that I had not, in fact, finished reading "Deeper than Skin" and immediately set to rectify the problem. And a problem it was, with, fortunately an easy solution. That solution being: Read an immensely detailed, rich story, with an emotionally wrenching, rather stark realization that, though the world is not perfect, there is a purpose and plan to it. What a beautiful coming of age, epiphany type story! That said, Bill, I am SO sorry I haven't finished it earlier. *beats head on desk* Ow. Remind me not to do that again. Anyway, I must have just lost track of it... I love this one. I was sitting, tears in my eyes, during the whole last chapter. Kudos to ya!! Cheers, Kellen | |
| daw the minstrel | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 1/16/2004 |
| I'm glad to see this story here, Bill. I enjoyed it on ff.net. Author Reply: Thank you Daw, your faithful support has been a very great blessing to me. | |
| Jen Littlebottom | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 1/8/2004 |
| Ahahaha... I love Thaltarma's vague response. The plot thickens - Thranduil owes Mithion a favour, certainly, but what is it that Mithion wants? | |
| Jen Littlebottom | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/8/2004 |
| Ooo.. fascinating! I love little Legolas getting into trouble - and his older brother, trying so hard not to lose his temper. I spotted just one typo: “Not to me, but to your niece, you’re father, and Celebithil his advisor.” <-- you're should be your. But other than that, a most curious beginning, and I'm wondering who this Mithion is... | |
| Nikara | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/6/2004 |
| I'm sure this will prove to be very interesting. It is well done, and I love the descriptions of your characters. Keep it up! | |