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| The Need of Many by Estelle | 2 Review(s) |
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| Orophins Dottir | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/8/2004 |
| OK, first things first. Humble Scribe has a headache already. Estelle are you Wanda or Cat? We are so confused. However, we KNOW you, Estelle, and that you are tricksy. We are already packing a bag of medical supplies and herbs, plus two extra quivers of arrows. Our prince is, we are sure, again in mortal peril. My liege, have you got the ransom money if I need it? Good. Now, where did I put that darn dwarf's address? I may need him. Already he is fighting with Adar? Usually, it takes my liege at least a chapter or two. You ladies are good. *Bows low to Cassia and Sio. Not THERE is Legolas torture!* Oh, I should talk. I have just started to make poor Haldir fall for a mortal. I have no shame. Let the angst of Legolas begin! I am ready! Humble Scribe to his Majesty Thranduil | |
| Eruanna | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/6/2004 |
| Hello hello! I'm your friendly not-so-in-the-neighborhood hyper reviewer! This is a nice story you guys (gals) have here! The first paragraph is very nice; excellent descriptions; it makes me want to be there! It also kind of drops you into the story; a very nice technique! Poor Legolas. (I tend to say that a *lot*, so please bear with me!) I hope he eventually fixes things with Thranduil... "Short cuts make long delays!" (as the Gaffer so wisely said...at least I think it was the Gaffer...) *thinks* *thinks some more* And so, with a evil character, a diabolical plot, and Legolas angst (which I am addicted to) in the first page, we have ourselves a very gripping beginning chapter. Good job! Author Reply: Hello friendly not-so-in-the-neighborhood hyper reviewer :D Why not-so-in-the-neighbourhood? :) Yes, poor Legolas. I tend to say that a lot myself too. He's so... 'torturable' Hehehe. The evil character is... wait, I can't tell you that. It would spoil everything. Guess you just have to read on to find out :D | |