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| Moriquendi – The Eryn Lasgalen Cycle by fan81981 | 8 Review(s) |
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| anne | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 10/4/2005 |
| I Love this story soooo much, your Legolas is wonderful and I think the relationship between him and Thranduil is amazing, please, please, please update soon xxxxxxx | |
| nedieth | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 8/9/2005 |
| hey, this is Nedieth, the post-reviewer. I am a post-reviewer because i don't review till i've read EVERYTHING. and now i have. I am enjoying your story alot. It's a unique legomance, not the typical girl, not the typical situation, not the typical elves even! There's so much drama and emotional problems, it makes me want to step into the story, set up an office, and give everyone advice. especially the Avari, they seriously have some emotional roadblocks. Now about this chapter. Both Cothion and Arandur are beating each other up emotionally, and its making everything worse! infact, there's so much getting worse, i don't see how you can even finish this tale in 2 parts! Legolas and Rhinure have this weird almost love/hate relationship, i have a feeling that it will eventually turn out right, but the only way can see that happening is if they listen to legolas's wise body guard whose name i forget right now, but is awesome. Attempt to update soon! Nedieth | |
| LORE | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 7/8/2005 |
| OMG! Finally! I was so giddy I was nearly pissing myself. I love the political conflicts you are setting into the plot, they are most intriquing. My only suggestion would be that there needs to be something beyond sex for Legolas and Rhinure in the near future. Possibly Legolas listening in on her converstation with someone else with regard to him, revealing the things about her feelings for him she does not want him to know. Love the series like vodka shots! LORE. | |
| Amanda | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 7/6/2005 |
| That was a good chapter. The conflicts with the brothers is very interesting and makes awesome drama. Again. I really like the way you write about Legolas and Rhinure's relationship with all the turmoil , conflicts and feelings - I really feel for them. I like how you dedicated a lot of this chapter to them and got them talking - perfect title for this chapter. Keep wriitng, waiting for next chapter. | |
| Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 7/3/2005 | |
| fantastic!!! please update soon..... | |
| sofia | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 7/3/2005 |
| a lovely chapter, as usual. The two brothers get interesting and interersting, yet I like Arandur. Legolas and Rhinure... its so fun reading about them. I wonderr if they'll get closer. Update soon! -sofia | |
| Brazgirl | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 7/1/2005 |
| Well, well, Legolas and Rhinure are lustful. There is something there... I guess Legolas can be persuasive sometimes. Thankfully. I guess in this chapter the point was that Avari conversation. The brothers... great dialogues. One suspicious of the other... and being watched! I am curious to know both king and mistress's reactions over the matter... | |
| lor | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 6/30/2005 |
| Perfect!!!! tHANK YOU SO MUCH! | |