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Moriquendi – The Eryn Lasgalen Cycle  by fan81981 14 Review(s)
Magicfeather205Reviewed Chapter: 10 on 7/27/2008
I've read both Moriquendi and this story and thoroughly enjoyed them. You have a style that is easy and enjoyable to read and your plot always keeps me guessing. I've also found myself growing increasingly attached to your characters - Arandur is my favourite! I hope that you have not abandoned this story and that we will see an update soon. I cannot wait until the trip to Gondor. Keep writing!

ChelseaReviewed Chapter: 10 on 1/20/2008
Words do not describe how much I enjoy this story, every time I read a new chapter I just love this story that bit more.

I really enjoyed this chapter and it was so great to finally have some communication between them, they really do work so well together. Rhinure seems to get more interesting every chapter, and while I initially started reading this story because I was fond of Legolas’ character, Rhinure has undoubtedly become my favourite character in this story.

I really can’t wait for the next chapter, please say it will be soon!

annieReviewed Chapter: 10 on 12/26/2007
Are we ever going to get an update........................................

NimueReviewed Chapter: 10 on 5/22/2007
Aww, i loved you stories, post more soon. If this was a book i would say it was a page turner but since is not, well... i couldnt stop reading, i cant wait for a new update. I like the way you make the characters human (i know that they are elves), what i mean is thst you show them, not as sappy but still perfect, you show that they have flaws. And i loved it how you joined relationships and politics, and how that afects those who have great responsability. So far I've loved all your stories. I look forward to the next chapters. ^-^

IdhrenielReviewed Chapter: 10 on 5/21/2007
Oh my... I love the way it ends. Nice chapter! I like the fact that Legolas is able to talk... Rhinure was so hard on Cothion... she was firm and correct. Thought as the Sacrifice. It was a great dialogue!
Thanks for the update!!!

Reviewed Chapter: 10 on 5/21/2007
I absolutely adore this story!!! I hope to read more soon!!!

SantooriReviewed Chapter: 10 on 5/20/2007
Enchanting! Delightful! Poetic! I love it! I just gush when I read your story! MORE MORE MORE MORE!

nemoReviewed Chapter: 10 on 5/19/2007
Why do all the reviewers side with Legolas? As much as I love this fic, I almost gave it up in disgust when Legolas was so obviously manipulating Rhinure. I should have known you wouldn't leave it like that, and that Rhinure was too tough and smart to put up with it forever. It's so rare that a fanfic addresses the (serious) issue of unequal power in a relationship.

Your dialogue is spot on, and I love how all your characters have such distinct and unique personalities -- although I still think Rhinure is giving too much ground, and Legolas has consistently proved himself to be childish, spoiled, controlling, sexist, pig-headed, manipulative, and selfish. At least he's intriguing!

Post soon :)

MissReviewed Chapter: 10 on 5/19/2007

An update!!! A million thank you's!!!

Argg, why is Rhinhure so difficult!!!! Then again she can't handle mushy stuff. She has to be the one who is in controle and not Legs. That's proberly one of the most interesting things in this story. How and when will she accept the feelings of love? Does she know what love is, anyway???

A couple a days ago I was thinking about this story (wondering when you'll have updated it). Where did you leave the she-elf that was 'chasing' after legs? I would LOVE to see her woo (.....forgot his name already...bad bad, Arendur??) the Kings guard!!!!!! That would be very intersting and funny. Is he married? Has he never been in luve with a wood elf? Or is he leaving a 'monks life'?

Update soon, this story is one of my favourites!!

annieReviewed Chapter: 10 on 5/19/2007
Thankyou sooo much. An update at last. this story is my all time favourite fic, another wonderful chapter, pleeeease can we have more, luv'n'hugs annie xxx

Author Reply: Thank for. For such nice, ego boosting words I will see if I can oblige. Maybe more love, but the hugs might have to wait given the couple's pact.

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