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| A Visit to Imladris by Dragon | 2 Review(s) |
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| sqrt(-1) | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/25/2004 |
| Goodness, I knew this seemed familiar. It looks like I read it last time I had a good Internet connection. And I did like it, it was quite funny, as I remember. | |
| sqrt(-1) | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/25/2004 |
| I've enjoyed all of your writing that I've read so far, and this seems like it will also be entertaining. One little thing though: the consort of Galadriel of Lorien? Now it's entirely possible that there is a meaning of "consort" that I'm not familiar with, but I thought that a consort was the spouse of a ruler? So the consort of Galadriel would be Celeborn (although since I'm pretty sure Celeborn rules Lothlorien as much as Galadriel, I don't think I'd call him a consort, but maybe you disagree, I know some people seem to). Maybe you want a different word here? Just a suggestion, if you don't like it ignore me. Author Reply: *winces* Ah yes, one of those things I should change. I wrote it two years ago now and it's a bit dodgy. I might have meant escort. But I was sure if began with a c... hmmm. Maybe I meant cohort. I'll change it! Thanks! :) | |