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Through the Lorien Glass  by Lindorien 6 Review(s)
AcaceaReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/11/2004
I thought I'd reviewed this. I know I intended to. Hmm..

Oh right, review -
we begs you to continue please.
This is good! It's brilliant and it's funny, and now I must go and re-read Carroll, because i used to like it so. And you use such nice Jaberwockian terms PLUS you providea free physics lesson. Gee, that's almost like, 2 challenges, isn't it? *ponders*

Smile? I shall happily laugh. only provide more.



Author Reply:
Oh, I'll be continuing. The question is, shall you continue laughing? Inquiring minds want to know.

So do I.

Okay - next chapter coming up.


Maeglin the TraitorReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/9/2004
"MAEDHROS! You really have to get a grip. I am on the verge of panic here! Think of your family!"

All of Maglor's entreaties seem to fall on deaf ears as Maedhros rolls on the floor, screaming.

"No, Maglor! You don't understand. She caught Celeborn and Miss Thing without their knickers! Where is Fingon? He MUST read this."

Maeglin the Traitor


Author Reply:

In panic Elf and Scribe both fly
The Elf is mad! The Scribe will die
Before another dawn draws nigh!

Fie! C'mon! Be a good guy!
Don't kill the Scribe! You can't deny
She made you laugh. Leave this fit you tie!

And so with angry, plaintive cry
The Elf did desist, no more to vie
To keep Fair Maedhros from his glee
Off to ponder what could be
The source of such ridiculous prose
Could it be the Scribe doth thumb her nose?

Orophins DottirReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/9/2004
ERU! You are certifiable, you realize this? I almost expired from laughter at this one. For this, I would even miss the Poker Finals! You have truly sunk to new levels. I salute you, Scribe of Gondor!

Humble Scribe to his Majesty Thranduil



Author Reply: It started out quite innocently
With nonsense verse writ randomly
From flying fingers growing callous
Not that any's writ with malice.

Unfortunately, there are those
Who won't see mirth among the prose.
They might even get annoyed
To see their icons thus deployed
In manner most humorous
And oft quite indecorous
Understanding not I'm only joking
And its only fun i'm poking
Such is life and life is short
Think you I might end up in court?


NolReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/8/2004
Goodness. This is utterly, utterly brilliant, and SO Carrollian it's not funny. Well, it is hugely funny. And the opening poem is poignant and sharply tongue-in-cheek all at once. It's amazing how you've balanced them out. This is just -- speechlessness-inducing.

Hehheh at Galadriel/Celeborn het. :) Go Lindorien! More, please?

Author Reply:

Thick and fast they came at last and more and more and more --

that will be my dedicattion to My Long Anticipated E/F Wedding Night Fic.

Oops! Forgot - I already did one of those...and kept it PG-13.

Damn!

should I put a warning label on my review replies?


SphinxReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/8/2004
Permit yourself to crack a smile.

*smile*

*grin*

*chuckle*

Count me in.

You have to continue this.

Author Reply:

Yes, I really must, musn't I.

Um...any ideas?


Kitt of LindonReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/7/2004
Do you wonder if I question your sanity? No! No, no, no...just a little.
Well then, I hope Galadriel does not kill you.

Author Reply:
Sanity? One must possess a modicum before it might be questioned, dearheart. I likewise hope Galadriel does not kill me. Nor anybody else in that Meshugganah place. I shall do like Sheherazhad (sp? - o come on, you know who I mean) and enthrall them with a thousand and one nonsense verses until they run screaming into the night.

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